So big D everything looks good with your portfolio, except the cover page. My suggestion would cut down on the introduction of the explanation and make it short and sweet. Also, I would post your original and then post your finalized copy. I could not determine which narrative was your original and what was your final copy. Put some signs on your cover page to guide us. Just needs some organization, I would recommend Original, Remixes of yours, Your Remixes, then Final.

Your remixes were awsome, you put some comedy into the stories you worked with and lets face it everyone needs some comedy in their life. Great job with the grammer corrections and the spelling error corrections. They were probabily all on mine...haha. Well Remixes looked good

If the narrative on your portfolio at the bottom is your final copy then it looks real good. Your cleaned it up and added some of the remix additions. Over all, good work and keep up with the great writing.

Cover 2/3

Original 4/4

Remixes 7/7

Final 6/6