After checking out your Portfolio, I liked what I saw. Your cover page is well organized with some great explanations of what your did and why your did them. Was a great guide to lay the road for your narrative and remixes.

I looked at the original story and your finalized copy and they look good. You made some changes and worked well with the remix editions of your story. I enjoyed your story and the way you put things together.

Now as for your remixes, I looked at the original's of everyones narrative and the remix you put together for them. I saw a difference in grammer and spelling but not much difference in the story line. I didn't really see any additions to the remixes you remixed, beside the grammer and spelling. I wish you would of been a little more creative with some additions.

Cover 3/3

Original 4/4

Remixes 6/7

Final 6/6