Ok, I waited until the last day to grade yours, so the fumes of the failing grade that you appointed me would not interfere with my perception. Therefore, using "Ninja's Grading Scale", only with the correct numerical sequence, since this was an assignment out of 20 points. I have come up with the following grade:

Content (7/8) Well, you get a point for actually looking it up in the dictionary. You also get three points for length and effort, but your content is seriously lacking. I'm not sure that you posed an actual argument, more than just making us aware of something that we already knew. The fifth and sixth points is for creativity. The seventh point is for process.

Flow (1/4) I was somewhat disappointed in your approach, since with a little TLC, it could have really shaped up. Your segways are fair, but all around it could be much better.

Spelling and Grammar (4/4) Although you did have the correct spelling, some of your sentencing needs better structure. It could be that you are taking on the stance of a more childlike perception, since this entire essay is about childhood fantasy, but it's a little choppy and thrown together. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

Cover (1/4) This "cover" had absolutely nothing to do with anything. But you get a point for calling it a "cover". ;)

Total: 13/20