I really did like Austin's narrative to begin with it was some what ruff on the edges but the final did clean it up a lot. I was really impressed with Austin's remixes. He really changed the story around. He did not just clean up the spelling and grammer. Regina's remix was funny compared to her original. Also I really likes the crazy adventure remix. That was Roberts narrative.

The only thing that I am taking points off for is the portfolio. I am not sure if Austin is done with it though. He did not explain what he did to change the remixes. Also he did not say how other peoples remixed helped him with his final paper. If he fixed the page I would give with a 20 out of 20. Right now I am giving him 19 out of 20.

Cover page - 2/3

Austin's Remixes - 5/5

Original - 2/2

Using others remixes 5/5

Final - 5/5

Farrah