Johns story was really interesting. It was nice to hear about what it is like to be in basic training. The part about what you do after you get out of basic is different. Most people do not really know what to do after you get out of training. Where do you go. John's final narrative was well done. It appealed to any audience. You did not have to know anything about the military to understand the narrative. I liked how there were pictures along with the narrative. The background also was cetchy. The remixes John did were helpful. I know because he worked on one of mine and it worked out nicely.

Cover page - 3/3

Teds Remixes - 5/5

Original - 2/2

Using others remixes 5/5

Final - 5/5

Farrah