Ted's Portfolio

This is harder than I thought it would be, and I hope I am doing this right. Here goes:

I thoroughly enjoyed Ted's story. It was nice to see it grow and develop into an engrossing narrative. I think he fully embraced this practice of expository writing in both his using of the remixes others did on his work and in his remixes of his classmate's work. Ted also completed all pieces of the assignment on time and with a lot of enthusiasm. Ted was fortunate to have, and I'm only slightly biased, three very informative remixes that each varied in style and format which greatly added to the final product.

Also, Ted set the bar high on the portfolio cover sheet, being very methodical and gracious in his explanation of his narrative experience. The only flaw I saw was the link at the bottom, which didn't take me to the final narrative, although this can easily be remedied I still have to give Ted a 2 out of 20 for the technical error. I'm just playin, great work Ted - 20 out of 20!

John S