Here be some grades

Alright, grading this paper is going to be easy. To start off, I liked the story. Just remember this when you read my stuff.

Cover sheet 10/20: I think there is too much "oh... blah blah blah... I didn't do this... hope you blah blah blah." Have more confidence.

Remix 50/60: The ending gets the points. The "Merry Christmas, Dad" was the icing on the poptart. The rest of the story was kind of boring, except that it needed to be this way in order for the ending to work so well. That all helps.

Remixing 20/20: This lady totally wrote up this fantastic story using the L-TEAM. I loved it and it doesn't matter what else she wrote to other people

Total: 80/100