A sad story. There seems to be some philosophy in there as well as some underlying regret. Very interesting.

Cover Page 20/20: A very organized and well planned collection of thoughts and explinations. Very easy to navigate thanks to the format.

Story 55/60: I took five points off because of some mistakes in the conversations. Catholocism is a branch of Christianity. You are not Catholic or Cristian. This kind of inconsistancy kinda bothers me. Other than that, a sad and real tale.

Remixing 12/20: I didn't see a whole lot of difference between what you wrote for them and what they wrote for themselves.

Overall: 87/100 As if you couldn't do the math.