Bomberman/Ninja/Steve/Super Awesome Man's Title Page

And so, we have the adventures of the L-TEAM, satisfying the masses. Their comic antics delighting as well as inspiring generations of loser writers. For those of you who give this narrative a poor grade, the L-TEAM has this to say.

K: "Who do you think you are?"

B: "Probably some no talent data cruncher who can't get laid"

K: "Why can't you recognise talent? Are you that blind?"

B: "You sore fucking loser. Bitch all day about how life delt you a bad hand with your no talent. I can't believe you think you have the right."

K: "So show me your masterpiece. Show me all the years of work you put into trying to create characters and plot that are relevent! Jackass!"

L: "It's not that we don't appreciate you taking the time to read our stuff, but to critisize in a negative mannor, on things other than poor spelling, is uncalled for."

B: "You're going too soft, as usual Luigi."

K: "Yeah! What are you, their fucking lawyer?"

L: "Fuck off Kirby. Why don't you suck on a ham ya fat bastard."

K: "Fuck you, greese ball fuck."

B: "So thanks for reading our stuff. More to come in the future."

Narrative

Ninja's Narative

Ninja's Remixed Narative

My Remixing

Nihilism

Ninja's Remix on Scott's Narrative

Ninja's Remix on Afram's Narrative

Their Remixing

Ted's remix on Ninja's Narrative

Danielle's editing Remix

Danielle's rewrite Remix

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