Austin's Portfolio

*Cover: Austin made his cover easy to read and very explanatory. I like his flow and his reasoning. 2/2

*Original: He was one of the first narratives that the class read. I found the story itself to be very unique. Not everyday we get a personal insight into sky diving, let alone from a guys point of view. Honest. 4/4

*Remix: Austin was one of the ones who remixed my narrative. I found his point of view creative and out there. Something I never would have thought of. He gives a twist to the common on all his remixes. And his style makes it fluid while keeping the readers attention. 8/8

*Final: All-in-all, Austin made the entire process easy and fun.

He is definitely a talented writer, and it is obvious that he took his time on this project. 6/6

grade: 20/20

Regina,

"twist to the common": a nice turn-of-phrase. yes!

Notice that I placed some of your evaluative statements in brackets to create more space for your rationale. These gutters indicate places where you could provide a snippet of Austin's prose, as examples of how he produced these effects on your reading, and how you anticipate his intended audience would respond, as well.

-ShareRiff