MY NARRATIVES

my 1st narrative

This narrative was more factual than entertaining or descriptive. This narrative is plain, simple, and not exciting.

most current remix of my narrative

I have made several changes to my narrative. This is my newest narrative, which incorporates some of Emery's and Austin's insights into my story.

Emery's Remix/edit of my Narrative Emery gave me some helpful insights and suggestions for my remix. I incorporated his ideas and also added to the story

austin's remix of my narrative Austin had some colorful insights to my narrative that I have incorporated.

REMIX OF OTHER NARRATIVES

remix of Austin's narrative

remix of Damien's narrative

remix of Danielle's narrative

Overall, the narrative remix experience has been exciting, creative, and insightful. I started out with a plain, boring, and simple narrative of my first day at USF-St. Pete, which was told in first person. After reviewing Emery's remix of my narrative, I decided to change to a 3rd person perspective. I also included some of his additions/edits of my first narrative to my current narrative. In addition, I incorporated some of Austin's suggestions/edits/ideas into my latest narrative. Remixing has allowed me to expand and develop my first narrative into a much better narrative, or at least I think so.