From the first time I read Scott's narrative I thought it was very well written. The first draft needed some tweaking which he did throughout all stages of the narratives. Despite joining the class late Scott has managed to not just keep up but excell on the wiki as well. Also a great idea for Scott to incoporate an image it really brought the final touch on his narrative. The thing I enjoyed most from Scott's narrative was the humor which was done with originality. Keep up the good work.

Grade by the Numbers:

1- Narrative transformation: 7/7

2- Participation in Remixes of others: 7/7

3- Originality of Work: 3/3

4- Final Portfolio Package: 3/3

Total- 20/20

1-Narrative transformation: Did the write take his diamond in the rough to a sparkling gem or was it left to gather dust. This includes grammar, flow of narrative, and improvements made to help the flow of the narrative.

2- Participation in Remixes of others: Did the writer fulfill the requirements of remixing three other students work.

3- Originality of Work: Was the writer’s work original that had flavor and kept the reader engaged.

4-Final Portfolio Package: this can be the cover sheet, but a place where all work during narrative assignment can be viewed.