Genocide

I gave him 5/5 for for Staying of focus. He had one approach and one voice that was employed through his statement evenly. His topic was strong and serious and his focus was just that.

I gave him 4/5 for spelling and grammer because he wrote very well and only had a few errors that were obviousely unintentional.

I gave him 5/5 for the image he put becuase it fit the writing well.

I also gave him a 5/5 for his definement of genocide and how he put in that he called the tragedy in Darfur just that.

19/20 total.