The total score of my evaluation is out of 20 points. I gave 5 points if the student stayed on point of his or her narrative story and managed to k eep a narrative stand point. I also gave 10 points if the students length was of over 200 words and penalized a point for every 15 points and student was below 200 words. I also gave 5 points for structure and how enjoyable the story was.

I gave 5 out of 5 points for the narrative focus because the narrative style flowed throughout the paper.

I gave 10 out of 10 for length becuase the length met standards.

I also gave 5 out of 5 for structure because the structure was good and I enjoyed the story.

20/20 was recieved all together