After hearing you discuss your narrative in class I was eager to read it and then I remixed it. Now I am able to see what you have created from yourself and the advice from you peers. The first thing I do is check for spelling and grammatical errors. Your final narrative had numerous spelling mistakes including once where you misspelled Athanasious who is the main character of the story. This is grossly inadequate for a final narrative is which you have had several weeks to perfect. You were deducted 3 points from the narrative transformation section. Your final narrative to improve from your first draft so you received your final points. You rebounded to get all possible points in originality and portfolio package. The final points rounding out the total is your participation in the remixes of others. In this category you received full points for this category as well because you completed the task and those who you remixed found many of your suggestions helpful. I enjoyed your narrative, just make sure to remember grammar and spelling.

Grade by the Numbers:

1- Narrative transformation: 3/7

2- Participation in Remixes of others: 7/7

3- Originality of Work: 3/3

4- Final Portfolio Package: 3/3

Total- 16/20

1-Narrative transformation: Did the write take his diamond in the rough to a sparkling gem or was it left to gather dust. This includes grammar, flow of narrative, and improvements made to help the flow of the narrative.

2- Participation in Remixes of others: Did the writer fulfill the requirements of remixing three other students work.

3- Originality of Work: Was the writer’s work original that had flavor and kept the reader engaged.

4-Final Portfolio Package: this can be the cover sheet, but a place where all work during narrative assignment can be viewed.