I read John's narrative in class two weeks ago and enjoyed it and I thought he did a terrific job of incorporating ideas that we had learned thus far into his paper. John received full points in all areas because he fully participated in remixes of his own work as well as the work of his peers. He was also original in his narrative from beginning to end and even extending to the format of how his narrative was posted on the wiki (not my cup of tea John, but original). His final portfolio had all required elements.

Grade by the Numbers:

1- Narrative transformation: 7/7

2- Participation in Remixes of others: 7/7

3- Originality of Work: 3/3

4- Final Portfolio Package: 3/3

Total- 20/20

1-Narrative transformation: Did the write take his diamond in the rough to a sparkling gem or was it left to gather dust. This includes grammar, flow of narrative, and improvements made to help the flow of the narrative.

2- Participation in Remixes of others: Did the writer fulfill the requirements of remixing three other students work.

3- Originality of Work: Was the writer’s work original that had flavor and kept the reader engaged.

4-Final Portfolio Package: this can be the cover sheet, but a place where all work during narrative assignment can be viewed.